Well done, a detailed post. A few questions... 1. Isn't the story more cyclical rather than following Todorov. It doesn't seem that there's any disruption of equilibrium? I didn't realise someone died - I thought they just passed out... the other characters don't seem to realise it? Include more screenshots of your video alongside screenshots that have given you inspiration. However, make sure they relate to each other - I'm not sure the LS of London really links to the LS of your living room!
Forgot to say, you also need a paragraph or so that explicitly looks at genre and how you conform to or break the conventions... remember that's the whole focus of the question!!
Well done, a detailed post. A few questions... 1. Isn't the story more cyclical rather than following Todorov. It doesn't seem that there's any disruption of equilibrium? I didn't realise someone died - I thought they just passed out... the other characters don't seem to realise it? Include more screenshots of your video alongside screenshots that have given you inspiration. However, make sure they relate to each other - I'm not sure the LS of London really links to the LS of your living room!
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